Oh, I remember a similar picture like this, and I certainly remember making a comment back then on how I couldn't do a critique for you. But now I can, so I will.
The idea is, well, really the same as the past one with flowers. May I ask what made you decide to use paper this time?
Overlooking the noise of the picture and how the concept doesn't seem different (unless you had something in mind?), there is one thing I would like to point out: the shadow.
The way the shadow is on the paper really takes away the idea that the rainbow is coming out of the needle tip. It looks disconnected...and there's actually a double shadow there too. I think changing the lighting would help.
The idea is, well, really the same as the past one with flowers. May I ask what made you decide to use paper this time?
Overlooking the noise of the picture and how the concept doesn't seem different (unless you had something in mind?), there is one thing I would like to point out: the shadow.
The way the shadow is on the paper really takes away the idea that the rainbow is coming out of the needle tip. It looks disconnected...and there's actually a double shadow there too. I think changing the lighting would help.
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