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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Is well creative and with the flowers a touch of a little bit of nature.
This is misteryous,strange,and weird beacouse of the illusion the imagination that we all have but we can't say it...cuz people will always trow rocks at you ^^
you should be inspired by this and could use the flower petal and colors and other crafts to do something more " magical ".
My upper critique is original and i dont want to start some fights XD ive got inspired by her critique and write my own but you see that every people can see the things that you see in many different ways ^^=
The idea is, well, really the same as the past one with flowers. May I ask what made you decide to use paper this time?
Overlooking the noise of the picture and how the concept doesn't seem different (unless you had something in mind?), there is one thing I would like to point out: the shadow.
The way the shadow is on the paper really takes away the idea that the rainbow is coming out of the needle tip. It looks disconnected...and there's actually a double shadow there too. I think changing the lighting would help.
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