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Sta.sh
Okay not really. Anyways, I'll just get started with the critique.
VISION
Great! Everything is nice in this! The animation is smooth, the expressions are nice, your meaning is very well conveyed. I love how the laptop sort of 'bounces' when he's typing. I can't find anything wrong with the vision, so great job!
I'll give you a 4.5/5 for vision.
ORIGINALITY
This is really original! I don't think I've actually seen any other deviation like this before! Maybe I just don't browse enough, but this definitely isn't an overdone concept, so great job for being original! Whoo!
I'll give you a 4.5/5 for originality.
TECHNIQUE
The animation is really smooth, the explosions are flawless. The shading is great, everything fits perfectly. I guess you could add come lighting from the laptop. I can't really tell if it the light blue blob below the emote's eyes is light from the laptop, or if it's part of the shading itself. I guess that's the only thing that bothers me, everything else is great.
I'll give you a 4/5 for technique.
IMPACT
I think this is the only category where I can point out a few somewhat solid drawbacks. First off, if it weren't for the words, I would think that the emote's computer froze. It's really not clear that it's online advertising that caused the... explosions.
And speaking of explosions, I can understand why the laptop exploded, but the emote?
Here's a good thing: It's actually great you used a gray background for the stamp, because the emotes different color emphasizes it and makes it the main focus of the picture, not the background, not the letters.
So good job on that!
I'll give you a 3.5/5 for impact.
Great great great job! The only reason I docked a few points on some of the categories was because I don't like giving (near) perfect scores, it makes me feel like I didn't help.
Your emotes and stamps are always amazing.
(400 words!
First of all, this is a fantastic animation on the stamp. When that blue guy gets too pissed and it goes BOOM! that's an epic moment on this stamp. Plus, this is a great stamp for people who hates ads on the internet. Anyway, it would be better if that blue guy was checking a website and a ad appears and then gets very pissed. You should at least try making the background more detailed than this one. It would look fantastic!
Made by the not amazing *StarLight134!
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